Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Fanfiction: Alternate 24 Day Three: 12:00 A.M. - 1:00 A.M.

Previously on 24...


Sherry Palmer promises to help President David Palmer with his investigation if she is released from prison immediately. Palmer agrees.

Max tells his men that Jack is now one of them. He orders Jack to break Salazar. Jack promises Salazar to keep the virus away from Max. Salazar gives Max the location, and Max orders his troops there.

At the Counter Terrorist Unit, Michelle picks up a call placed by Jack, using his cell as a one-way. Jack says out loud the location of the virus.

Chase Edmunds speaks with his team about their positions at the mine. Captain Reiss says it will take ninety seconds to move in on the mine.

Mandy tells Jack Bauer and Max that the pickup of the virus is off. Max shoots Mandy in the back.


12:00 A.M. - 1:00 A.M.

12:00 A.M.
As they walk toward the briefing room, Tony is curt with Michelle about not making any mistakes while they prepare to help Jack.

12:02 A.M.
Mandy, still alive, lies in a pool of her own blood. Max chides her for not listening. It is too risky to take her to a hospital. To end her suffering, Max shoots Mandy again to kill her. Nina says that Mandy was right -- Jack is still working for CTU. Max warns her never to mention Mandy's name again. He and Jack lead the team to the cars to retrieve the virus.

12:04 A.M.
Sherry lets Palmer know that she's leaving the office to meet someone who has information on Kingsley. "I still believe in your presidency," she says, vowing to find out as much as she can.

12:06 A.M.
Tony briefs his staff about the Posta Mita location where the virus is located. Chase will provide visual confirmation because Jack can not transmit the information. Chloe is in charge of communicating with Chase.

12:07 A.M.
In the woods at Posta Mita, Chase sets up a parabolic dish to pick up the sound. He sees Jack and Max pull up. Max orders his men to set up a perimeter. Nina tells Max that she can prove Jack is setting him up. Based on her CTU experience, she is sure that there will be a reconnaissance man watching them from the hills. Max sends two guards to check it out. Chase sees the men coming towards him.

12:08 A.M.
Adam goes to Kim's desk and notices the baby. She tells him it is Chloe's child, but Adam knows that Chloe never had a baby because he did Chloe's background check.

12:09 A.M.
Max enters the mine house and asks the captive Salazar where the virus is located. Salazar is silent. Max tasks Jack with getting the information out of Salazar. Max then radios his two men in the field looking for the sentries that Nina described. One of the men, Holt, does not immediately respond. Nina comments that the man must already be dead because CTU has gotten to him. But Holt responds, telling Max that no one is there. Max orders him to hold his position. Max doesn't see that Chase has Holt at knifepoint. Chase knocks Holt out. Jack threatens to kill Salazar if he doesn't tell Max the virus's location. Salazar tells Max and Jack that the virus is located in a heavily protected safe in the basement. Only he knows the codes to get in.

--Commercial Break--

12:16 A.M.
Chloe comes to Kim's desk to check on the baby. Kim asks who the child belongs to because Adam says it isn't hers. Chloe admits that her boyfriend, Eric, is the father. He is trying to hide the baby from his ex-wife because her new boyfriend has been abusing the child. Chloe claims that Eric has contacted a social worker. Knowing this is kidnapping, Kim suggests she report it. Chloe accuses Kim of being at fault if something bad happens when the baby is returned to her mother. Michelle interrupts them to get Chloe back to work.

12:18 A.M.
Sherry meets with a man named Kevin Kelly in his run-down mobile home. She has proof that an account was set up in his name after his daughter was killed in a car accident. Kelly embarrassingly admits that he saw Kingsley driving the car, but was paid off to keep his mouth shut about that and financial deals he discovered between Kingsley and known terrorists. Kelly agrees to share the details of these exchanges in return for the President pardoning his son from prison. Kelly's son was convicted for murder.

12:21 A.M.
Nina presses Jack about his working for CTU. He says that she doesn't know what she is talking about. Nina knows he will be killed once Max gets hold of the virus. Max comes in and tells Jack that Salazar is being resistant. Jack goes down to the basement and trains his gun on Salazar's head. Max orders a few guards in from the outside to assist Jack.

12:22 A.M.
Chase sees five guards enter the building. He radios back to CTU. Tony orders Michelle to send in the delta teams because the virus transfer is about to get underway.

--Commercial Break--

12:27 A.M.
As Chloe continues monitoring Chase, Tony gets a call from Kim. She has something urgent to speak to him about Chloe.

12:28 A.M.
Outside the trailer, Sherry calls Palmer and asks about pardoning Kelly's son. She explains that Kelly was paid not to pin his daughter's murder on Kingsley and to cover up Kingsley’s deals with terrorists. Kelly will now admit what he knows in return for this pardon. Palmer needs time to think about this and hangs up. Wayne advises the President not to do what Sherry asks because she has her own agenda. Wayne would rather send Sherry back to prison. Palmer is unsure what they will do about the Kelly pardon.

12:30 A.M.
Kim tells Tony that she thinks Chloe is delusional. Chloe lied about the baby and her boyfriend being the father. Kim looked into it, and found no abuse charges filed with Child Protective Services. She didn't confront Chloe because the woman is unstable. Tony, unfortunately, needs Chloe because she is the only one who can filter the audio streams from Chase. He doesn't want her distracted, and he asks Kim to watch the kid until the mission is over. Tony says they will deal with the baby once they have possession of the virus.

12:32 A.M.
Sherry goes back to the trailer but finds that Kelly isn't there. The place has been ransacked. She exits the trailer warily and heads for her car. As she searches in her purse for the keys, another car approaches. Sherry panics, and several men shoot at her. She runs but they catch up and taser her.

12:33 A.M.
With a gun trained to his head, Salazar opens the last of the locks. Inside the safe is a briefcase. He takes the briefcase out of the safe and shows it to Jack, Nina and Max. Salazar removes a canister from the case and hands the vial to Nina. She places the vial into a spectroscope to test the substance inside of it.

--Commercial Break--

12:40 A.M.
Chloe complains because she doesn't have enough audio filters, and Adam tries to help her out. Wayne Palmer calls Tony to chew him out about the secret mission. The Pentagon is furious that they weren't involved. The President will be forced to hold Tony, Jack and Gael accountable. Wayne asks that Tony walk him through the plan.

12:42 A.M.
Nina's spectroscope conveys that the virus is 100% verified. Max is pleased and aims his gun at Salazar. Jack pleads with Max to spare Salazar's life. They can force Salazar to hand over all his money. Max agrees and leads his group out of the mine house.

12:43 A.M.
Chase reports to CTU that Max and his henchmen are leaving the mine house. He also sends the news that Nina is holding the vial of the virus, and Tony orders the delta teams to raid the site. While Chase is relaying more information, static fills the line and CTU can't hear him. Chloe explains that she changed satellites in the middle of the operation without telling anyone. Adam begins to worry. They get Chase back on the line, to everyone's relief.

12:44 A.M.
Max and Nina get all their equipment in the trucks. She hands the vial over to Max, who in turn places it in the briefcase. Nina asks Max if he believes the operation was a success. He nods his head and Nina trains a gun on Jack, saying that he is no longer needed. Chase radios to CTU that Jack is in jeopardy. The delta teams won't make it there in time to save him.

12:45 A.M.
Nina tells Jack that she has wanted to kill him for a long time. Before Nina can pull the trigger, Chase shoots her in the shoulder. The guards open fire and Nina runs off into the woods. Jack grabs one of the guard's weapons and begins taking out the men. In the confusion, Salazar breaks free from Max and they wrestle over control of the briefcase. The searchlights from the helicopters burn down on the hillside, and Chase lets Tony know that the delta team has arrived. He runs down to where Jack is. The chopper fires missiles to take out some of Max's men. Helicopters from Max's army arrive and fire on the American choppers. Jack sees Salazar rushing off with the briefcase, and he runs after him. Chase radios to CTU that Jack is pursuing Salazar and the virus.

--Commercial Break--

12:51 A.M.
Sherry is dragged into a dank room by her kidnappers. There, a well-dressed man wakes her up with nitrate poppers. Sherry recognizes the man as Alexander Trepkos, respected oil businessman and defense contractor. She’s surprised he would be involved in Kingsley's plot to detonate a nuclear bomb in Los Angeles. Trepkos admits that Kingsley was nothing more than the shield to mask his involvement, as well as that of his superior, Max. Trepkos tells Sherry that she will soon work for Max.

12:53 A.M.
Chase and some members of the delta team catch up with Jack in the woods. Jack is relieved that Chase is all right. He directs the choppers to pursue Salazar.

12:54 A.M.
Jack and Chase come upon Salazar, who is bleeding from a gunshot. Salazar holds the briefcase, but Jack refuses to let the agents open fire. He begs Salazar to hand over the virus. Salazar complies and throws the case on the ground. Desperate, he then takes out a gun and fires on the team. Jack and Chase kill Salazar. Jack opens the briefcase, but finds no vial.

12:56 A.M.
Jack takes Chase's phone and calls CTU to tell Tony that he does not have the virus. The briefcase was empty, which means that Max has the vial. Tony lets him know that the delta teams have found Max. Jack says that Nina has also escaped. Chloe chimes in that the delta team has spotted Max two miles west of their location.

12:57 A.M.
Captain Reiss and his soldiers stop Max's truck and hold him at gunpoint. Max turns his eyes to the trees nearby, and his men open fire on the delta team, swiftly taking them out. Max smashes Salazar's cell phone, and drives away with his bodyguard.

12:58 A.M.
Adam loses Max's cell phone signal, and Michelle gets word that the delta team was ambushed. Tony gives Jack the news that Max escaped. He can not be tracked because there is no satellite coverage. Jack tells Chase that they need to find Nina.

12:59 A.M.
As he safely drives away, Max pulls out a cylinder from his breast pocket which contains the deadly virus.

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