Sunday, March 27, 2011

Fanfiction: Alternate 24 Day Three: 11:00 P.M. - 12:00 A.M.

Previously on 24...


Alan Milliken confesses to President David Palmer that he helped plan and execute a biological attack on the country. Palmer demands to know who Milliken's employers are. Milliken answers that it is Peter Kingsley. "Then our best hope is to talk to our only link to Kingsley," Palmer tells Wayne. Palmer enlists the help of his ex-wife, Sherry Palmer, now a federal prisoner.

Jack Bauer tells Claudia that he is still working for CTU and that he's infiltrated the Salazars to take control of the virus.

Claudia tells Chase Edmunds that the virus the Salazars have, Jack is going to take from them. Chase helps Claudia, Sergio, and their father escape from Max's army, but Claudia gets shot in the head in the crossfire.

At the Counter Terrorist Unit, Tony Almeida says that they still haven't established contact with Jack, and tells the Delta Teams to stand down until they find him.

Max tells the Salazars that their time is up. Armed choppers and humvees fire on the Salazar ranch. A missile blows the ranch away. Max kills Hector and captures Jack and Salazar.

Tony informs Chappelle that Nina Myers is working with Max. Jack tells Nina he wants to join Max's organization. "Convince me," Nina says. They kiss.


11:00 P.M. - 12:00 A.M.


11:00 P.M.

Adam finds Max's location from Salazar's cell phone. There may be bodies and vehicles nearby, but it cannot be identified from the satellite.

11:01 P.M.
The Delta chopper lands in the Mexican field to pick up Chase, as well as Claudia's father and brother. They quickly take off before Max's henchmen spot them.

11:04 P.M.
Wayne calls Tony on his way to a federal prison and tells him he is going to question Sherry. With Roger Stanton dead, she is the only available person to have dealt with Peter Kingsley and the oil consortium apparently behind the virus threat. Tony says that this is their working theory now too, substantiated by the appearance of Nina Myers with Max. She was, after all, involved in their attempted attack three years ago. Wayne is still upset that Nina escaped from North Africa. Tony expresses his frustration as well and excuses himself to get back to work.

11:06 P.M.
Tony briefs his team on Max. Jack must confirm that he has the virus before CTU can intercept. Adam pulls up a photo of Nina, and Kim is shocked to learn that Nina is involved. Tony ushers Kim out of the room to explain. "She killed my mother," Kim cries. "My father couldn't even pretend to work with her."

11:07 P.M.
Nina continues to kiss the handcuffed Jack. But she pulls away because she can feel him lying. She knows he still despises her and is working with CTU. Suddenly, Jack head butts Nina and she falls back. Jack crashes into the wall to smash the wooden chair he's been chained to. He grabs a remnant of the chair and holds it to Nina's neck. Jack explains that he is a fugitive and that he needs this $15 million. Max and several guards run in and find Jack holding Nina hostage. There is a standoff. Jack says that he wants to join Max and his terrorists and is willing to do anything to become a member. Max asks whether Jack is willing to have a deadly virus unleashed upon his own countrymen. Jack nods his head. "I'm not a patriot anymore," he says bluntly. Max smiles and informs his men that Jack is now one of them. Nina is upset.

11:13 P.M.
Max re-enters Salazar's holding room and tortures him mercilessly.

--Commercial Break--

11:17 P.M.
Wayne enters Sherry's cell. She is angry with Palmer for not keeping her out of prison. She tells Wayne that she will only talk if Palmer gives her a full presidential pardon. Wayne calls Palmer and informs him of Sherry's demands.

11:20 P.M.
As Jack tells Max he doesn't know where the virus is, Mandy comes into the building. Max asks Mandy what his search of the area around the ranch yielded. She says that they found a truck with a dead woman in the bed, whom they identified as Hector's girlfriend. Jack can barely hide the flicker of pain on his face.

11:22 P.M.
Wayne tells Palmer he does not want to grant Sherry a pardon. Palmer orders Wayne to put his ex-wife on the phone. Palmer explains the virus threat to Sherry and Kingsley's alleged connection to it. She promises to help if she is released from prison immediately. Palmer thinks for a moment and then agrees to her inserting herself in the situation.

11:24 P.M.
Chase gets his hand bandaged at the portable command post. Claudia's father explains to Sergio that his sister died to keep them safe. Captain Reiss of the Delta team tells Chase that CTU wants to pull back his surveillance team now that there are armed choppers in the area. Chase wants to personally track Max even though CTU is ordering his evacuation because his partner's life is at stake.

11:25 P.M.
Adam picks up vehicle movement on the ground in Mexico. Chappelle doesn't want the Delta team to move in until they have a visual of the virus.

Max exits Salazar's holding room, frustrated. He orders Jack to break Salazar. He will prove his loyalty by doing so. Jack enters the room and stabs Salazar in the arm.

--Commercial Break--

11:30 P.M.
Wayne re-enters Sherry's cell and hands her Palmer's pardon. She is free to go. Wayne leads Sherry out of the prison and into his car. Sherry senses Wayne’s unease. Wayne tells Sherry that he doesn't agree with his brother's decision.

11:33 P.M.
Kim tells Tony that it is hard to put her feelings aside about Nina, the woman who killed her mother. Kim feels that Nina is violating the terms of her Presidential pardon by working with Max and the terrorists. She begs Tony to make Nina pay for what she has done.

11:34 P.M.
Chloe asks Kim to watch her baby while she runs downstairs for a briefing. Kim is flustered, but is left with no choice.

11:35 P.M.
As Jack tortures Salazar, Nina says to Max that Jack is working with CTU in order to set him up. Max says that he already checked Jack out, and he threatens Nina not to undermine the situation. Jack asks Salazar to give him the location of the virus. Both of their lives depend on it. Jack promises to keep the virus away from Max and to protect Salazar’s life. Salazar gives in and he reveals the location to Max, Jack and Nina. Max is pleased, and orders his troops to that location.

11:38 P.M.
Adam tracks Max's location. Gael suggests that they swoop in now to grab Max and the virus. Tony wants to wait for Jack to send them a signal of confirmation. However, they don't know how Jack will get word to them.

--Commercial Break--

11:43 P.M.
Wayne questions whether the White House should inform the Mexican government about the troops on Mexico's soil, but Palmer doesn't want to jeopardize the operation. Wayne and Sherry arrive and the President awkwardly shakes his hands with his ex-wife. Palmer takes his brother's advice and agrees to place a call to the President of Mexico.

11:45 P.M.
Palmer asks Sherry how much she knows about the extent of Kingsley's criminal activity. Sherry admits she knows very little about his terrorist connections and this contingency plan but assures Palmer she knows where to look.

11:46 P.M.
Mandy informs Max that their forces are setting up a perimeter around the virus's location. Seeing Salazar tied up, Mandy pulls Max aside. She warns him that they should abort their mission to retrieve the virus because something is not right. Max says that they don't have a choice because Salazar has the only stockpile. Jack secretly dials Michelle on the cell so that she can listen in. He says out loud that they are picking the virus up at the location. Mandy still expresses her reluctance, but Max orders her to follow his command. Max asks for the cell phone, and Jack is forced to hang up on Michelle. Yet Tony has heard enough information to send the Delta teams into position.

11:48 P.M.
Captain Reiss gets the coordinates for the virus pickup and mobilizes his men. Chase questions why they are staying so far from the location. Reiss explains that they will send one observer to confirm the virus, but will hold the combat troops back. Chase volunteers himself to be the observer.

11:49 P.M.
Mandy continues to question Max about the security of picking up the virus. Max reminds Mandy that it was Jack who broke Salazar out of prison. He wants Mandy to follow his orders, like she has always done. Nina loads Jack into the car. "You can't control this, Jack," she says to him.

--Commercial Break--

11:54 P.M.
As Kim tries to console the crying baby, Chloe comes back to her desk. She accuses Kim of doing something to make the baby cry.

11:55 P.M.
Michelle and Tony brief Chappelle on what they learned from Jack's call. They hear a baby cry, and Chappelle goes upstairs to the Field Ops office to reprimand Chloe. He tells her that she is suspended, but Michelle reminds him that they need Chloe to take care of the digitally enhanced audio surveillance in Mexico. Michelle suggests that they deal with Chloe's child care problems some other time. Chappelle tells Chloe to have Kim watch the baby.

11:56 P.M.
Suited up in camouflage gear, Chase maps his and the commando teams' positions with Reiss.

11:57 P.M.
Jack and Max's group of terrorists pull up to the warehouse where their tanks are located. Mandy is alarmed because there are not enough tanks. Max accuses the woman of losing her nerve, and the two argue. Jack says that they have to retrieve the virus very soon. Mandy yells that the pickup is off. Max assures Mandy that they need to follow through because the virus is crucial to their plan. Mandy disobeys her superior and orders the guards to leave. Max shoots Mandy in the back. Jack and Nina are stunned.

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